These are the raw texts:
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You just made me grin like a mofo :)
When I think about how much i wish i was with you, it almost hurts. I'm not lyng when i say i really, really need a hug. Mostly just because i'd be in your arms.
You're an amazing guy who makes this special girl smile. A lot :)
You're always on my mind. I'm glad you said it too, because i wanted to say it but couldn't. You are so important to me.
I love you :) You're one of the very best things in my life.
knock knock. Who's there? A smile. A smile who? A smile that's going to last all day because of my amazing boyfriend :) I hope you have a nice day my love.
I don't realize how much i miss you sometimes. And then all at once it takes all i have not to jump in the car and drive to see you and kiss you and hug you.
I couldn't wait to text you later. i got back to the room last night so full of happiness and love i felt like i was going to burst. I know i'm going to have a good day :) i love you so much. Have a wonderful day my dear, I'll see you later.
haaaaahahahahhaha oh i love you :):)
Have tight sleep night :)
wait... why would i be unconscious???
you know, no one can make my day like you can :)
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This is what they looked like after i took what i needed (sounds gruesome? it is?)
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knock knock. [taken] a smile who? [blank] because of my amazing boyfriend :) I hope you have a nice day my love.
I [taken] how much i[taken] . And [taken] [taken] [taken] not [taken] in the car [taken] [taken] you [taken] you and hug you.
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haaaaahahahahhaha oh i love you :):)
Have tight sleep night :)
wait... why would i be unconscious???
you know, no one [taken] like you can :)
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What I came up with in conclusion: it is REALLY easy to write poetry. I finished this piece in just two hours. So many times I wish I had an extra word, (that texts simply lacked) to make the line shine with rhythm or humor. Yet I didn’t and only was able to work with what I had. My result is below and honestly, I think I did a pretty good job. Friggin ego…How love works (a.k.a. Recycled Love)
This special girl – amazing guy don't realize.
It takes a lot with you. All I have.
I couldn’t wait. You said it too. Miss you sometimes.
I felt like happiness and love. I'm glad.
When I say I was going to burst,
I was not lying. It almost hurts…
Who's there? A smile? “Have a wonderful day,
I love you. I'll see you.” You can make my day.
Then all at once:
A smile that's going to last all day!
Think about you –
Just how much my mind wanted to say.
Last night, I know, I really wish
To jump and drive, to see and kiss.
Best things? A mofo my life. I know.
Be in your arms, my dear? Always on!
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